Entertainment Speech -Self Critique

Please post your self critique for your entertainment speech here. I am looking for a deeper and more detailed critique than submitted this summer. The speech critique must include strengths and improvements. It must be a minimum of 200 words. Do not just focus on your delievery. I want to hear about your content too. Please identify the element of humor techniques that you incorporated in your speech. How successful were these techniques? What would you do different? Or, the same if you performed this speech again? BE sure to view your youtube clip before positng and refer to it in your post.