Passion Speech Critique of Speech Buddy

This post is devoted to commenting and critiquing your speech partner's passion speech performance. The critique comments should include both the strengths and improvements of their performance. Please do not focus strictly on the delivery elements and comment on the entire performance in content, visual aids, delivery and preparation. You should be addressing the final goals of effective communication and audience adaptation in all comments. Give suggestions for needed improvements and support the elements that were examples of effective communication. This critique is due by Wednesday, August 5th.